About a bottle...
Jinguchakka wrote a poem in his blog about a bottle...
http://jusfun.blogspot.com/2006/10/shards-of-soul.html
Here is my two cents on the same...
Be it medicine or liquor,
I served mankind during their needy hour.
Not long ago was I fully filled,
I now stand empty and purpose fulfilled.
Here I am broken and down,
Anger and Agony making me drown.
I am lying on the ground without care,
Waiting for the sweeper to dispose me somewhere.
Alas my wait has turned futile,
And I end up hurting everyone with vile...
http://jusfun.blogspot.com/2006/10/shards-of-soul.html
Here is my two cents on the same...
Be it medicine or liquor,
I served mankind during their needy hour.
Not long ago was I fully filled,
I now stand empty and purpose fulfilled.
Here I am broken and down,
Anger and Agony making me drown.
I am lying on the ground without care,
Waiting for the sweeper to dispose me somewhere.
Alas my wait has turned futile,
And I end up hurting everyone with vile...
posted by Ananya S P at 11:25 AM
8 Comments:
Beer bottles are recycled.
:-)
hmmm kalakkara... oru bottle la quarter irundhalum... bottle ku ennavo bhoda erathu... adhunaalla dhan ennavo...bottle odayuthu...
:) Nice one. As somebody said, you don't need a good subject for poetry. A poet can make anything a good subject, as you just demonstrated
Engayo poittiye Ma.
paopao wang,
thanks :)
i,
I know that!
jinguchakka,
:)
vishy,
appadiyaa??
twisted dna,
thank you :)
deepa,
Engayum pogalai :)
happy birthday!
(did I get it right this time?)
prachi,
thanks :)
And welcome to my blog!
the kid,
Nope :)
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